•I decide to do my recent news video about the real problem of economic crisis which it started few years ago.
Spanish people are not used to see this huge crisis which is existing nowadays in Spain.
•Spain is converted to one of the country which has the most economic crisis.
In my short video I want to show the introduction of economics crisis which will last approximately 2:30 min.
• My aim is to make people see pictures about the horror fight between the cop and students.
•Spanish students and international student are making effort to live in a difficult moment in economic crisis.
Since few days ago they decided to manifest because they don’t accept on what government has cut and stop to help student to continue their studies.
•In the beginning of the video I will illustrate pictures on power point about explaining in general the crisis in Spain and I will add some statistics pictures to show the difference level of quality of life between 20 years ago and now, meaning I will make the audience to have an idea about how many Spanish people lost their jobs because of the crisis and how Spain is getting worse each day.
So in general at the beginning is to make audience to have an idea about on what is going on and of course there I will as well make a general summary about the fight. I will add as well some short video from Youtube to show the huge percentage of unemployment that there is in Spain, one of the biggest actually (40%-50%) to make the audience to have an idea.
In the body of the video I will introduce real pictures from the fight and also I will add short video about how they are fighting between the cop and students. I will add a power point presentation to say the different problems that have happened recently about this situation.
At the end of the video I will show another short video how they were fighting and as well showing some real pictures how students were beaten by the cops.
Dear Carla,
There are several things:
1. Please could you use correct grammar and punctuation in your posts.
2. Please give your posts ‘tags’, which are unique identifiers for each of your posts.
3. I have read this post several times and I am still not clear as to what your video will be about, I understand that it is about the students and the fact that the government in Spain is not paying for their studies etc. and that there is a link between this and the financial crisis. What I don’t understand is how you intend to show this in the video.
4. I am confused by the sentence at the end of the post which talks about the difference in the quality of life between now and 20years ago.
5. You really need to think about what you are trying to do.
Hello M.Blyth
Here you have the corrected work, I did it better and now I know what I am doing, I mean i understand it. I have clear ideas and they are specifics.